My Reason to Breath - I miss You

My Reason to Breath - I miss You

There is no single moment

That I never miss you

I breath with your live &

You are my heart to survive 

When you feel down or get sick

I want to paddle all my strengths 

For just to get you to safer bridge &

If I can't, I want to cut my wrist

When you are away & there is trouble

I can feel more pain than you are in

Because I am living in you &

You are my reason to breath

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Mirra]

I see you're fond of writing love poems and what I like about it is the emotions behind every piece. Thanks for sharing this :-)

[stars are far]

aww that was so cute, i loved it ;)

[Eve Ola]

Thank you:)

[Aprille]

Filled with emotions of true and pure love.
I like it. :)

[Eve Ola]

Thank You Olive:)

[Aprille]

You're welcome.

[Ayushi]

Such deep and true love..
Totally admire your write.. :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Ayushi :)

[Wandering Minstrel]

Outstanding write with fantastic presentation

[Eve Ola]

Glad you like it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"Because I am living in you &
You are my reason to breath "
Real love make us crazy with emotion. I like the amazing poetry for love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

and thank you for giving me very kind feedback :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Matching Socks]

Full of emotion for sure, love is powerful indeed but a love that makes you want to slit your wrist?
I would not endorse that kind of love.

[Eve Ola]

same here i too dont go for it.Thanks for the feedback :)

[Matching Socks]

Glad to hear. :)

[anne]

you added to it lot of emotions........i like the last paragraph whenever we feel a person to be an important part of life.......we too start sharing his feelings.......

[Eve Ola]

You are right! Thanks for stopping by :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ohhh Penny I can feel your love and longing for your boyfriend.I know it is hard to be apart from the one you love.You wrote this with so much emotion and hope :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Vidya :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Welcome :)

[Penny]

Made me emotional. True depiction of every simple and grand love story. After reading this I miss my boyfriend even more terribly (who is 1500km away from me). He does all that you have written in this verse which shows your creative genious more efficiently than his love. Thanks for sharing.

[Eve Ola]

your comment made my day really. going through same deadly distance. i have more writes that you can relate too. i will let you know soon. hope you
will enjoy n relate too. Thanks again :)

[Penny]

I will just dont make me cry.

[Eve Ola]

aww no i dont :)

[Penny]

Then its ok. :-)