Disappearing

Disappearing

Without me, you may feel good

Without me, you may be happy

But Someday, somewhere I bet you,

You'll need me and miss me

Because I did my best all the time, I knew

But a time comes when you realize..

Then you don't have anything

As by now, I am gradually disappearing !!

~AK~ 

© Eve Ola

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

True and honest words.
"But Someday, somewhere I bet you,
You'll need me and miss me"
Your words are true. We miss what we can't have. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Penny]

The importance of a person, and the place he has in our lives, is not usually known or valued until he's gone. It tears you when you see this distance increasing every second. Your poem can be interpreted in nany ways, a romance diluted in a sea of insecurities or a friendship put to test of time and lagging behind in the race of life. Very emotional, sweet and thoughtful write. Thanks for sharing.

[Ashira Macy]

This reminded me of the song "Without You" from Rent. Beautifully written. People may think that they are better off without someone, only to realize too late that they were so very wrong. Great write my dear.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Ashira

[Aprille]

So honest and true... "As by now, I am gradually disappearing", love the last line. :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Olive

[Aprille]

You're welcome.

[Lyn Anderson]

I like the little postcard. It adds to it. I would suggest, however, replacing Then with When in the second last line, it would make more sense.

[Eve Ola]

thanks for the feedback I do appreciate

[A. Amos]

I love it...one of the best from you!

[Eve Ola]

Glad you liked. thanks

[stars are far]

That was very sad, the endings are sad, but requires us to be strong

[Eve Ola]

yeah right. Thanks dear

[MsJewel]

The end of a relationship is always difficult...You have described these feelings well.

:) Julie

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Julie

[Avinash]

People normally know the worth only when those things are gone. Beautiful write eve.

[Eve Ola]

hmm true. Thanks Avinash