Papa - I need You

  Papa - I need You

Pa,
I miss you always by my side
I miss you always deep in my heart
I miss you always with these silent tears
I miss you always in this lonely world

Whenever I see others,
I feel like the most unlucky girl 
I feel like all alone in this cruel world
I feel like deep buried under the dark gown
I feel like dead with just moving soul

Whenever I saw them with their dads, I thought 
As they are more blessed than me
As they have a strong shadow
As they have a strong protective shield
As they have more love than me

I always see their father's
Whenever they fight against the world for their happiness
Whenever they kissed their foreheads, then
Whenever they hugged them tight and even
Whenever they bring, medicine to them 

But for me, you are not here 
I miss you more when having fever 
I miss you more when I just need a single hug
I miss you more when I need support
I miss you more when am standing alone

I am alone Papa,
I miss you dearly with my cries
I miss you more when I took just a single breath
I miss you more when hardly hit by others
I miss you Papa I miss you 

Papa can you hear me?
May I pluck you from above?
May I replace my place with yours?
May I see you more close to me?
May I hug you just for once?

This time we really need you Papa
Don’t you want to stop our mummy's cries?
Don't you want to come back?
Don't you see this misery from above?
Don't you request Lord for the relief?

Papa ... 
I want to meet you ...
I want to see you or just a look..
I want to hug you even just for once..
And just want to sleep in your love lap ...


~AK~ 

© Eve Ola 

Author's Note

ignore words repetition, as its my old writing... I don't want to amend it

Reviews

[Kenneth Nicholas Lowe]

I miss my dad right now....Thank you for doing that...

[kublakhan27]

I had meant to read this one a while back, but I deleted the link by mistake and I had to search for it...I can't tell you how much this one moved me...I think I mentioned previous review that I lost my father just a few years ago but it still feels like yesterday...you've truly encompassed all of the thoughts and questions that go through a mourning mind and heart...nicely done Eve, you truly spoke to me with this one.

[KWP]

Love - pure unadulterated love .... sending love to you gorgeous a lovely write filled with solace and yet laced with love xx

[Penny]

Its kinda funny because I wrote a story called Papa and treated the subject differently in it. Its a heartfelt piece, very emotional and hits your heart more than anything. Well done.

[Steve L.]

Deeply heartfelt piece. Screw the repetition! It is from the heart.

[Avinash]

Hard but beautiful read . A work out of love is beyond criticism.

[Mayank]

the repetition have worked here, the emotions are giving message through repetition.

[KK]

Well, i enjoyed it. Nice work

[Matching Socks]

I think your repetition really drives the message home, you can feel the longing in this.
Well done.