Friendship Bonding - Best Friends

Friendship Bonding - Best Friends

A Poem by Eve Ola
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July 15th, 2014

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 Friendship Bonding - Best Friends

A journey starts when we get into the MBA,
The way we first interact was memorable
We never knew each other before, but
The only common thing we have was PCC
(our college)

The journey we shared was so incredible,
The projects and front desks viva's still on top
The grouping bunking and “full ON fun” throughout
,
These are the memories that can never move out

No matter how long the distance is,
But for two of us is bonding still strong
It’s too easy for us to share smiles and
For tears we already have shoulders strong

May pain be never be in your way and
May happiness be always there stay
I will forever stand by your side,
Just a call and I will be sitting beside.

Remember how we react, when they call us belonging sisters
,
Oh no way :D but always wish to have our friendship whispers 
True friends we are, true friends we will be
Together we will grow this friendship tree
..

We two are enough with bonding quite strong,
It will remain the same even if the distance is long
I have a very special friend in you,
Hope you know all I say is not fake but true.

Always let your emotions flow,
And let this friendship to glow
Yes I miss you truly and dearly and
I wish our friendship stays forever

~AK~ 



© Eve Ola 

© 2014 Eve Ola


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Lovely my favorite Stanza's lines here.


No matter how long the distance is,
But for two of us is bonding still strong
It’s too easy for us to share smiles and
For tears we already have shoulders strong

May pain be never be in your way and
May happiness be always there stay
I will forever stand by your side,
Just a call and I will be sitting beside.


Remember how we react, when they call us belonging sisters,
Oh no way :D but always wish to have our friendship whispers
True friends we are, true friends we will be
Together we will grow this friendship tree..

We two are enough with bonding quite strong,
It will remain the same even if the distance is long
I have a very special friend in you,
Hope you know all I say is not fake but true.




Beautiful expression of friendship
many can relate to this.




Thank you for sharing.


Take care Benita


Posted 6 Years Ago


A beautiful poem for friendship. We need good friends. We need places where we know we are safe and loved. Thank you for the story of friendship. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


So lovely. My very best friend from school, Emma, is now thousands of miles away in New Zealand, but we are still in contact thanks to the technology available today. It's not quite the same as face to face, and I truly would love to see her again in person.

Beccy.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is such a sweet tribute to someone you are clearly very close to. It makes me miss my best friends, they all moved off to distance locals and left me here, though it is not their fault. Still, it is hard to be without them. Very beautiful and touching work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


friendship is such a wonderful thing to possess. Never lose sight of it, for you may never get it back. Whoever this poem was for, I hope they enjoy it. Very endearing poem, loved it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


There are a few silly grammar and syntax errors but it's another 'lost in translation' thing so don't fret. Rhymes fall in and out but for the most part they're pretty good, though you've made a rhyming faux pas and rhymed 'strong' with 'strong'. The message of the poem is perhaps a little over-simplistic, but it's wonderfully clear, and endearingly written. Hopefully whoever it was for gets to read it and understand your feelings.
Very cute, but a little cutesy.

-Robin

Posted 6 Years Ago


wow...so sweet...friendship is a wonderful relation... :))

Posted 6 Years Ago


It is a beautiful poem for your friend. I am sure she would love it too. One small mistake "uproot this friendship tree" . Did you mean grow...because uprooting is quite opposite I guess.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Eve Ola

6 Years Ago

oopps right right, Thanks a lot :)
Friendships are so important, lovers come and go but friends stick with you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Eve Ola

6 Years Ago

Exactly ! Thanks Ana :)
very good title! It drew me in. Good write, worth the read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Eve Ola

6 Years Ago

Thank you Susan :)

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