"Knowing you was a pleasure"

"Knowing you was a pleasure"

A Poem by Thepensiveplayer
"

When we meet, we walked each other's path

"
Since that great day we met
we got stronger to handle our threats
as you grew in more ways than one
I couldn't fathom the rest of your life's run

We learned from each other all the time
while we face our goals through life's climb
Our interactions were never a waste
because we helped each other to a better place

Though our missions weren't sometimes clear
we pushed ourselves through the fear
After our prime we kept going
even while fatigue made its showing
but you reflected on your spiritual core
and what made you strive for more

Achieving your goals was an honor to see
because I'll always respect what you've grown to be

© 2018 Thepensiveplayer


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Powerful and worthwhile words and thoughts shared.
"Though our missions weren't sometimes clear
we pushed ourselves through the fear
After our prime we kept going
even while fatigue made its showing
but you reflected on your spiritual core
and what made you strive for more"
The above lines. I loved. All of us should know joy when a friend know success and happiness. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

Powerful and worthwhile words and thoughts shared.
"Though our missions weren't sometimes clear
we pushed ourselves through the fear
After our prime we kept going
even while fatigue made its showing
but you reflected on your spiritual core
and what made you strive for more"
The above lines. I loved. All of us should know joy when a friend know success and happiness. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really good, Will continue to check out your work. Loved the poem. Reminds me of the fear I had when I was ill and I respect you for sharing this. Keep going, don't give up and remember to carry on when things get tough. You got this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


True friendships last doesn’t matter if you speak to them everyday or just a little, I love this piece and the story of friendship I sense perhaps a bit of grieving almost like they were and are gone could be wrong but I enjoyed it

Posted 4 Years Ago


Happy New Year To Thepensiveplayer What a beautiful reflection of an awesome spiritual strength and unity of a friendship A treasury of beauty to read from a treasury of beauty that writes Greatest success 2018 and beyond

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thepensiveplayer

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I really appreciate that.

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

253 Views
4 Reviews
Rating
Added on January 9, 2018
Last Updated on January 9, 2018

Author

Thepensiveplayer
Thepensiveplayer

Harvey, LA



About
My name is Corey Johnson and I enjoy writing poems to apply growth to myself. I've always wondered," what constitutes a good life in this world?" "Should a person conform to society's expectations or .. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Colors Colors

A Poem by Justin