"The Eyes of the Wind"

"The Eyes of the Wind"

A Poem by Thepensiveplayer
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"Its help you can't see that makes a better you"

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Its a presence you can feel
Yet, it can be startling at times
It beckons your soul to heal
While showing you a myriad of signs

As you decipher what they mean
you overlooked their placement
Even though the answers can't be seen
They keep your mind in amazement

Maybe the wind sees more than what we are
and all the things we can be
as we evolve from our scars
Remember your mind is your life's key 

© 2018 Thepensiveplayer


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Your last line is so true and instructive, Corey. The entire poem is good. Still, the last line truly resonates. We're often our own best allies and our own worst enemies, all within the mind, construction and destruction often at the same time. And, perhaps nature sees more than we imagine. Nice work, sir.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Just as the wind flows, our minds flow into all sorts of directions. Millions of neurons firing off to produce work just as the one I just read. It truly is the life's key. It has all the answers before you can produce the question. I really enjoyed this piece as it was highly thought provoking. Thank you for sharing your mind!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wise life advice in this one. I enjoyed the rhyming. It is true....our minds can take us anywhere. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful poem...great work of words and rhythm..best wishes

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like children, we are, led by a greater power, shown only what we need to see, revealed only what we need to know, as we ascend the ladder of spiritual growth and learning. This poem had a very soothing and reassuring effect on me.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great, great and again GREAT piece! after reading Your reviews to me, I'm not surprised to find such profound poem written by You, amazing amazing thoughts, awareness and growth of one's emotions, spirit and mind, some of Your line hit me, because it's the same way I see it too, the journey of a being's development, the signs that are cast on the road and how many might ignore them... the things we might not understand, but just feel them, knowing it's all a part of the progress, and oh You've nailed it at last! "Your mind is your life's key"!! I can't agree more!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your last line is so true and instructive, Corey. The entire poem is good. Still, the last line truly resonates. We're often our own best allies and our own worst enemies, all within the mind, construction and destruction often at the same time. And, perhaps nature sees more than we imagine. Nice work, sir.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Thepensiveplayer
Thepensiveplayer

Harvey, LA



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My name is Corey Johnson and I enjoy writing poems to apply growth to myself. I've always wondered," what constitutes a good life in this world?" "Should a person conform to society's expectations or .. more..

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