Sweet Lady Cancer

Sweet lady cancer,
how do you swell within my soul?

Sweetness; lady cancer
let's make a deal before control.

Sweet lady cancer,
you saw my name and took a vow,

Sweet lady cancer,
I saw the doctor, where are you now?

Sweet lady cancer,
you're lying low and hiding in fear,

Sweet lady cancer,
I relish my time while you draw near,

Sweet lady cancer,
you aren't as tough as you once thought.

Sweetness; lady cancer,
you cannot take what you have not got.

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

I love this! Your style is amazing! OK, I really like the way you've organized this, with the 2 lined stanzas. It looks neat and makes it all the more interesting. And of course, your words are beautiful too! The idea to start every line with "Sweet Lady Cancer" was genius C= And the message is wonderful too! Great work!

[JadeForever]

I like this a lot...i actually enjoyed how u janged to sweetness lady cancer at the end..it just gave it a lot of impact for me..good poem

[selkietales]

This is really good and I like how you repeated "Sweet lady cancer," but why change it to "Sweetness; lady cancer" seemingly randomly?

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A guiding piece, one finds ones self intwined with the wording, well done, good read.

[joshua deathdealer]

Excellent expressions. This could be huge.

[Danielle.W]

You had me at the title! Seriously, I really love the "Sweet lady cancer."

[Cassie Fraga]

whoa.... you express well in this piece!!! I sense power in these lines!! very nice penning!!!

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

beautifully expressed

[W. Paul Keoke Maury]

You have amazing talent just so you know. Always be positive about everything no matter what.