The Question

The Question

A Poem by exotic flotsam
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A poem about existence and sentience

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Who knows I exist

Who cares I know I exist

More than I now do

© 2013 exotic flotsam


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As children we have this funny idea in most of our minds: that when we leave school our teachers simply wait there until we show back up again. They only exist in the environment we see them in. As adults we logically know better. But deep inside our minds we still feel the same. We could care less about their lives when we aren't there.
Aside from that, wonderful poem lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

exotic flotsam

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading my work Knightingale. Many people must have some sort of at least one of the s.. read more



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this honestly just says so much in such a short amount of words, good job, and thank yu for entering in my contest, this is a great piece, really makes me wonder who cares when you're not there? I just love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


As children we have this funny idea in most of our minds: that when we leave school our teachers simply wait there until we show back up again. They only exist in the environment we see them in. As adults we logically know better. But deep inside our minds we still feel the same. We could care less about their lives when we aren't there.
Aside from that, wonderful poem lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

exotic flotsam

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading my work Knightingale. Many people must have some sort of at least one of the s.. read more

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Added on July 31, 2013
Last Updated on July 31, 2013
Tags: question, self, existentialism, sentience, conscience

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exotic flotsam
exotic flotsam

Bellevue, WA



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I'm an adrenaline junkie former lawyer stay at home Dad, infatuated with elevated writing. more..

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