Feel Free

Feel free,

oh, be free,

as free as you can be.

Free of all earthly

problems and strife,

free to revel

in your spiritual life.

Be free of turmoil,

sadness and woes,

take in the richness

that only heaven knows.

See all the heavenly,

golden light,

where all the negative

is banned from your sight.

Wrap yourself

in God given health,

which is far richer

than any earthly wealth.

Reviews

[Leo]

I like the title feel free as opposed to be free but perhaps you chose the other way around to emphasize to be free..it reads smoothly from start to finish with a beautiful rhyme and rhythmic melody..Two Thumbs Up! Love spiritual poems and yours made my day!

[Barbara Walker]

Thank u so much

[Mauricio Montoya]

this is a very beautiful piece my friend, thank you for sharing.

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you, Mauricio!

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Predominantly for the most part, only human beings possess the ability and curse of worry ... In some instances animals do exhibit this trait, but humans have mastered it to the degree of over thinking everything in our lives, while spending our days, our time, our thoughts, in doing all we can to be free, when in fact we, ourselves, have enslaved ourselves within the deep recesses of our own minds, taken prisoner by worry over things that we possess no power to do anything about ... Sounds like great words of wisdom doesn't it? ... Yet, I am just as powerless as any other individual upon this planet ... In fact, I worry more than most, and live free less than more than most, but this fact does not change the truth that a worry free life brings to us nothing less than freedom to live for as long as life will allow us ... Good thoughts that are very contemplative and thought provoking ...

[Barbara Walker]

I wrore this to my twin sister after she passed away from ovarian cancer in 2013. But I am glad the living are getting something from it, too!

[Jamestown]

Amen! Love this piece:)
Great flow and rock solid message,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you Jamestown. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

[Einstein Noodle]

so glad i read this first this morning .. sets my head right ;) ever so true .. spiritual journeying is not an easy task .. thank goodness for the available help :)
E.

[Barbara Walker]

O I am helped on my journey when my words can help others in any way. Thank you.

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ..........

[Rick Puetter]

What aa poem of rejoicing. If we can really take this advice to heart, we will be free.

Wonderful lines of encouragement. Greatly enjoyed.

High marks.

Best regards,

Rick

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you Rick. I so hope this is what my twin sister is experiencing. This and even better.
Barbara

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear friend. Real freedom is free and for us to behold. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote