"hard payment"

"hard payment"

A Poem by goldifada
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i have write this while i was in such a bad situation and i thought maybe i can share it so i can see what peapole thinks of it!!

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     please god let me pay
    for every mistake i said it was okay
  cause i'm dieing a thousand death in a day
   if this is my faith i'm not gonna runaway
   juje me so slowly cause you don't know me
  been treating like a dog not gonna kill me
  but one day i'm gonna come bach for my enemy
  beware of me cause it will be so hardly
  i'm done ,i'm mad,i'm crazy
 in my society where there is no mercy....

© 2013 goldifada


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thank you !! ALEX this so nice from you!

Posted 6 Years Ago


The rhymes in the poem alone captivate the rhythm of the sound. nice job well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

with pleasure and there will be more!! stay in touch ;)


Posted 7 Years Ago


A lyrical poem...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 8, 2013
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goldifada
goldifada

relizane, relizane, Algeria



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i write songs lyrics!!! and also storyies from reality!!! and imagination! more..

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