life

life

A Poem by goldifada
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another little try but with a big ambition!!

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life is such an ideal place
where you can learn from your own mistakes
sometimes it works
sometimes it fails
everyone got a special case
we must keep running after our dreams
and it's by forgetting the blablabla of our enemies
no more worries or tears just a lot of positive energies
no can stop us no one can beat us
cause we are so much stronger than that
enejoy every day like it your last day
cause we live once

© 2013 goldifada


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This is such a beautiful and motivational piece, loved the way you wrote and your talented writer with a positive heart. One of your finest work I read so far...


Second last line need attention:

Just amend, "Enjoy"

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enjoyed this cute song. Nice message. Well penned

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thank you !! :) it was a little try!

Posted 7 Years Ago


interesting. Nice message in this poem. Thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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goldifada
goldifada

relizane, relizane, Algeria



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i write songs lyrics!!! and also storyies from reality!!! and imagination! more..

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