Recitation of a Story

Just as I felt an unexpected happiness is waiting round the corner.

In a story, there were two strangers in their own time. It was a different time on the watch of reality. They started to say what they feared saying. They started to hear what they feared hearing. Yet, something was melting into another something.

The unknown remained unknown as recitations of new chapters began. But who could really read what their hearts truly connoted? Even the sullenness pointed that they were allowed to dream. Again. Together. For each other. With each other. That would break the vicious circle of grief.

On a morning after sunrise, the sound of heartbeats was not heard. Such was the way they met that time. As the recitation prolonged, they did not realize that in between the words of life, love intruded. Deluded heart. Dreamy and magical. Intoxicated. And all of a sudden the recited words started to wonder, “Which way should I go?”

The question found its own answer. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Meshalini]

Wonderful...

Nice use of words.... Well done...

[SZHZIA]

well written a story in very short form. I really like it, Fahmida. Thanks for sharing.

Best
Szhzia

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Much thanks for your gentle review. Keep reading! :)

[SZHZIA]

It is my pleasure to read your story, Fahmeeda. You are welcome.

[Unknown Poet]

Very nice use of words ... Great waiting....

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you for your appreciation. :)

[Rafy T.Nym]

There is a soft but iridescent flow of words. . .right words used in right way. The title matches the style, as if you were reciting a familiar fantasy poetry which came into existence from the core of your heart. "On a morning after sunrise, the sound of heartbeats was not heard"- the line emphasizes the serenity. . .you have no idea how much I wish for such kind of morning. Blue words. .dreamy words. Best wishes. :-)

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you very much. Such mornings are worth living for, indeed. :)

[Ardra]

wow Fahmida loved this one :)..... the dreamy world... the answers which we search for but the ones which find are not the ones we wanted.. very good write

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Some answers are only meant to come at the right time.
Glad that you liked it. :)

[Manu]

A very deep and engaging write, Fahmida :-)
I especially loved these lines..
As the recitation prolonged, they did not realize that in between the words of life, love intruded. Deluded heart. Dreamy and magical. Intoxicated. And all of a sudden the recited words started to wonder, “Which way should I go?”
This story has profound imagery and romance :-)

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Much thanks for your appreciation.
A mere attempt to express some unexpressed emotions!

[Shabeeh Haider]

The answer provided by life is often not what we expected or had hoped for.
A very deep and heartfelt write.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thanks a lot for your valuable review, Shabeeh.
True, as to what you said. Somethings shall go far and beyond... till the end of time.

[Bala Gorthi]

A script with depth making the readers to dig. Very thought provoking write ! I loved that statement of love intruding the words of life . This makes the answer very obvious.
Thanks for sharing this write...

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thanks a lot for reading it and appreciating it. It is a great inspiration! :)

[Jacob Clifford]

Thought-provoking. Very romantic, dreamy tone.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Love, as it may come!
Thanks for the review, Clifford.