Unfound

Everyone saw the anger.
Why did no one see the disappointment?
Everyone heard the argument.
Why did no one hear the audible silence?
Everyone saw the insensibility.
Why did no one see the patience?
Everyone clapped at the momentary accomplishments.
Why did no one admire it till the last?
Everyone saw the tears dropping dramatically.
Why did no one see the bleeding heart?
Everyone saw the ego.
Why did no one see the compromises?
Everyone saw the intolerance.
Why did no one see the acceptance?
Everyone felt the stiff side.
Why did no one check on the naive corner?
Everyone came down with accusations.
Why did no one acknowledge the repentance?
Everyone grasped the flaws.
Why did no one caress the little goodness?
Everyone came down with charges.
Why did no one have her back?
Everyone marked the failures.
Why did no one cheer the courage?  
Everyone called all their bitter words advice.
Why did no one realize that it was an epilogue to her self contentment?

 

 

Author's Note

Raw Sentiments

Reviews

[Ardra]

Wow fahmida.... something i could relate with...
somehow your poems end up resonating with me a lot..

Everyone saw the anger.
Why did no one see the disappointment?
Everyone heard the argument.
Why did no one hear the audible silence?
Everyone saw the insensibility.
Why did no one see the patience?

mmm :) sometimes life is like this isnt it dear..
thanks for always sharing wonderful creation of yours.. love reading them.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Aww Galadriel! Thank you so much for such a sweet comment. Life is, indeed, very difficult to handle. So demanding!

I appreciate your encouragement. Keep reading!

[Great Aunt Astri]

Everyone is always ready to point a finger and condemn. Few really appreciate the good intentions. You questions make a strong impact. Good for you for writing it.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

I appreciate your understanding, truly. Thank you for your valued review.

[Weeping willow]

Wonderfully expressed, there a lot of emotions hidden within the lines.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you :)

[Bala Gorthi]

You have mirrored the way the world (people around) plays with us very well. Every word is true universally.
A good write to carry along especially when we play the part of world with others.
Thank you for this nice craft, Fahmida!

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Delighted by your review.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Wonderful and riveting!
This is kinda satire on human nature with focuses on the dark side rather than overlooking the positiveness.
"Everyone called all their bitter words advice.
Why did no one realize that it was an epilogue to her self contentment?"
Thank you for sharing:)

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you for the review, Tanzeen. It really means a lot because, as I said, these are all genuinely raw emotions. It feels lighter at heart when someone, be it anyone, at least gets that this feeling is burning inside.

Keep reading and happy writing. :)

[William Liston]

There's lots of truth in this piece. Sometimes, we can only see the flaws instead of realizing how beautiful something may be. This can be especially bad when we use this way of thinking on ourselves, seeing only the shortcomings as opposed to the accomplishments. The message shines through clearly. Thanks for sharing.

- William Liston

[Fahmida Mehreen]

That is the sad part: You do a million good things and they are all taken for granted; you make one mistake or make one wrong call and you have the rest of your life to pay for it.

Sad but true.

Thank you for your appreciation and mostly, understanding.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Well i can totally relate it to myself, there will be no one to praise you in your failures..
Every word is true in your poem...i really really like it, i wanted to read this type of poem and you nailed it
...thank you so much

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you for the review.