A Poem by fallen.angel.

my head resting on your leg
your hand stroking my hair
the white snow falling outside
creating a winter wonderland
your eyes are locked with mine
your gaze melting my heart
the fire crackles in the hearth
the warmth flowing over both of us
you stand up
take a hold of my hand
gently put on my coat
kiss my forehead 
you lead me outside
into the winter wonderland
the snow is still falling
drifting slowly to the ground
you grasp my waist
lift me up
twirl me around
laughter escapes my lips

you stop spinning

pull my lips towards yours

plant a soft promise on it

and embrace me


we stand outside

In this winter wonderland

as the fire crackles

snow drifting to the ground


© 2013 fallen.angel.

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This was sweet and very well-written. I enjoyed the way you played with the idea of a lover who wants to dance in the snow. The imagery was beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago

A beautiful poem. I hope to keep the winter wonderland at a distance for a while. Need a few warm days. The poem is very good. I like the description and hope in your words. A excellent poem. Thank you.

Posted 10 Years Ago

beautiful description! loved it ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago

Wonderful images.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Such a wonderful romantic image...I love it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

So beautiful. I loved this poem. It was so well done. Thank you for sharing it.

Posted 10 Years Ago

My attention is totally drawn to this poem, I can't drawn my attention back, this is such a beautiful poem! A charming image swam into my view when I'm reading it. The scale and the formats are well planned, it follows step by step, just like staircase. A really beautiful poem!(Even perfect! :) )

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is beautiful (: I love the images it creates. The formats beautiful to, very good job (:

Posted 10 Years Ago

A seasonal and dogmatic prose that fills the reader to no end, well done

Posted 10 Years Ago

I love this :D

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on March 4, 2011
Last Updated on March 6, 2013



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