Not What You Think

He's not who you think he is,
He's Lucifer's right hand man.
He's not what you think he is,
He's an Angel of Darkness.

He possesses a heart of stone,
A heart as cold as ice.
He possesses a kiss of death,
A kiss that will rupture your soul.

He's what you should fear,
He's the root of all your nightmares.
He's what you should hate,
He's the one who will destroy you.

He's someone you can't run from,
He's a part of your life now.
He's someone you can't forget,
You're in too deep to back out.

He's the Dark Angel,
An Angel created from all evil.
He's the perfect man,
The man you can't resist.

You've been ensnared by his darkness,
The depths of his coal black eyes.
He's a drug that hums within your veins,
Destroying and rebuilding you over and over again.

He's going to break your heart,
That's who he is.
He's going to hate himself for it,
Because he's the Angel of Darkness,
with snow white wings.

Reviews

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

WOW O.o

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think you did a great job on this poem. It was written beautifully. I loved the message within the poem. Now you can avoid a person like this. Thanks for sharing. :D

[mi-chan]

Beautiful choice of words! I especially loved the end ^^ how he's apart of the darkness yet has "snow white wings". Loved it =)

[Balls:)]

i too, agree with these people, coyote, most of all, the ending was really something that stuck in my mind, very great choice of words.

i give this poem a rating of...

Fantastical :)

[A.Noel]

it's so beautifully written and so true :)

[lexie shockley]

I love it because of how truthful it is

[Just Me]

I loved it. The way he breaks people's hearts by "playing" in the light when in fact he is truly dark. This was really good.

[Coyote Poetry]

"He's going to hate himself for it,
Because he's the Dark Angel,
with snow white wings."
The ending was perfect. Easy to play in the darkness and the light. Hard to control emotion and desire. No weakness in the poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Maggie]

This describes a character in one of my books perfectly. You do know how to do a antagonist. This is going in my favorites :)

[Krisen Lison]

Beatuiful! Just, amazing Eevii!