My Fart Smells Better

My Fart Smells Better

A Poem by Fanciful Goddess
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I love Happy Bunny...So I wrote this poem...it reminds me of what he would say...lol

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My fart smells better.

like roses in a meadow.

In A mythical, magical world of wonder and beauty.

I am sunshine on a cloudy day.

I make rays of light shine down from the heavens.

I bring a blood red blush to the moon.

I make flowers wilt at the sight of my incredible beauty.

Dont you wish you could be like me?

Of course you do.

Cry a river and get over it!

© 2016 Fanciful Goddess


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Fanciful Goddess
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hahahahahahaha!

Posted 14 Years Ago


ROFL! I bow down to your cute farts! There's a strange twist on this I can't quite put my finger on... Like the stiff jab at the ending with the final line. It's got punch to it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


haha nice! very creative take on things, and i like the wordings you used :) i love happy bunny~ ^_^

Posted 14 Years Ago


A very interesting piece, I couldnt really put my finger on what to decide, pretty confusing i must say, trying to bring an oxymoron in the topic that farts smell like roses, wow, pretty confusing, I've seen mind boggling stuff, but this...eh, you got me still confused, full of thoughts that this poem is full of vanity and selfishness.
Mind boggling poem!!! xD
P.S. I love those bunnies

-Flo

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow cool poem, and the bunny is funny.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The beginning is crude then the middle of the poem is lovely then back to the rudeness. Reminded me of someone very vain, who thinks very highly of themselves, yet the way they treat others shows their true colors. Very amusing poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think the flowers wilt for another reason, but that's just my opinion. This was a very... Intering peice, as most of your's are. Not something most people would write, which I suppose is a good thing, and it flowed well, good wording, save for the first two lines, but that's probably because I'm into being extremely proper and talking about things like... involuntary bodily functions... isn't something I'm very interested in. Though, overall, good piece, I liked the ending line particularly. I recomend "cry me a river, build a bridge, and get over it" though.

Luna

Posted 14 Years Ago


That truly was epic... great job. lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


funny and unique
Didn't expect that


Posted 14 Years Ago



lol that was funny, I love Happy Bunny too, I have one of his calendars =)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 17, 2010
Last Updated on September 18, 2016
Tags: Funny, joke, poem, poetry, fart, roses, meadow, beauty, moon, bloodred, sunshine

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Fanciful Goddess
Fanciful Goddess

myrtle beach, SC



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(ABOUT ME) Brandy Nicole Taylor June 27,1986 Brown hair Brown eyes 5"1" I'm 25 years old -------------------- (´-`).。oO( Oops I farted ψ(`∇&ac.. more..

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