I love to sing lalala Dead corpse song

Ever wanna just kill someone...

 

I love to sing lalala dead corpse song.
Youll love to sing it soon enough.
Youll die.
Life goes on for others, cuz nobody likes you.
You will die..
You will die.
Everybody be happy.
I be happy.
I pluck your eyes out .
Your screams of agony will be my music box.
Blood everywhere will be grand.
One of the grandest things.
Cut the flesh and make it bleed.
All your crying did no good.
I hate you.
I hate you.
forver more.
I want to kill you myself.
I fantasize of such things, divine.

Reviews

[Masaking]

Good job! Let me know if you need help with your soul; I'm up for anything with death lol

[Ruby Moon]

lol... i can imagine this being sang in a cheerful almost kiddy tone while the person singing is tearing apart his or her (for some reason my mind says it is a her) prey

[Cory Plata]

Wonderful.

[Aldora Sparrow]

I shivered. Such hatred, such strong animosity...I can understand the hate. Wonderful

[Momo the Elf]

oo i like this one! it flowed nicely, and i like the dark contrast between the cheerful, happiness the speaker finds at these horrific murderings... great job :)

[Sseoni]

Interesting and dark poem! I love it! :D

[MusicJunkie66]

it was really dark and gothic.
good job :]

[Allison]

This is great! It's really dark, but at the same time really intrigueing.... Is that how u spell it?

[hannah]

A dark poem but an intriguing one. Shows how people sometimes experience bloodlust all of a sudden for no specific reason.

[QuietPoet]

Very interesting piece of writing. It had nice flow.