Tell him I love him, Worst fairytale of them all

Tell him I love him, Worst fairytale of them all

A Poem by Fanciful Goddess
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A poem of heart break and the hell called reality.

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Looking out across the night time.
I lose my heart.
I see you my love.
Looking out across the night time
I lose my heart, It's forever yours
Why, why must I love you?
Tell him that he is my love.
Tell him that he's my true love.
Looking out across the night time.
I'm dreaming of You my love.
Why, why ? must I love you?
Tell him that I miss him.
Why, why dose he do me this way?
Why, why must I love you?
Get me out into the night time, dancing and loving him.
I can't live without you.
I grab my chest holding back the tears.
Why, why dose he do me this way?
Why, why dose he bring me so much joy and so much 
sorrow?
I look into his eyes, from a distance.
Lucky girl.
My happiness and joy are within those eyes.
He's the reason for my broken heart.
He's the reason for my  Tears on the ground.
Lovely dreams are not a reality.
It's always a nightmare waking up.
It's hell seeing my love with you.
Lucky girl.
I think of him every day and night.
Tell him that he's the love of my life.
It was love at first sight.
Lonely nights are spent on my window seal.
Beneath  the moon.
The moonlight is a romantic thing.
Makes me cry even more.
My heart is a big old wreck .
I know the meaning of love.
I feel love.
When I'm near you.
I'm having a love heart attack,Hell it is.
Why, why dose he do me this way?
This must be the worst fairytale of them all.
So much for my happy ending.

© 2011 Fanciful Goddess


Author's Note

Fanciful Goddess
Enjoy! The inspiration of the melody of Michele Jackson's Human nature ....I made up new words....Oh day before my birthday witch is 27th of this month will be the exact day he died..R.I.P MJ!!

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Wonderful work - great read - very heartfelt :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful~ nicely written~ =^~^=

Posted 13 Years Ago


Few spelling errors:
dose --> does
seal --> I am quite sure you meant "sill" :)

A very reminiscent poem of my not so long ago days. I liked the repetition in the beginning... Maybe if you made the opening lines reappear again it would give it some closure unless you want it open. You kind of brought the recurring theme back with the "Why, why does he do me this way?".... Overall a pretty good write. Good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this. It has a nice rhythm.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is wonderful. Michael Jackson proves that even dead that he is still an inspiration :)
The only thing I have to point out is the you spelled does. Its not spelled dose, love. 100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved it =] good emotion (Y)
good write =D

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 5, 2010
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Tags: love, hell, pain, poem, poetry, Romance, unrequited love, Breakup

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Fanciful Goddess
Fanciful Goddess

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(ABOUT ME) Brandy Nicole Taylor June 27,1986 Brown hair Brown eyes 5"1" I'm 25 years old -------------------- (´-`).。oO( Oops I farted ψ(`∇&ac.. more..

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