Cruel day

Nothing goes my way,no romance,bored,drpressed

“Cruel day”

 

 

 

 

My tears slip away across the universe.

Nothings gonna change my world.

My heart broken and bleeding in pain.

Will never have a heart to feel the same.

It’s all a cruel joke, my world.

Nothings gonna change my world.

A cruel day a cruel year, With cruel summers

of heart ache.

Why is life so cruel?

Nothing goes my way.

Nothing exciting happens to me.

No romance, no love, no fairytale.

Fantasy out of the question.

A cruel day.

I wake up to cruel days.

Go to sleep knowing I’m going to

Wake up from a great dream.

I wake up to a cruel day.

It’s a cruel day.

　

Reviews

[SwagMaster]

A good poem, great setup. But it's a little depressing.
A couple grammar corrections:

Nothing's gonna change my world
A cruel day, a cruel year
A cruel day, a cruel year, with cruel summers

And this one is really optional:

Of heart ache

Those are the only mistakes I could find.
Great poem.
BC
PS: please mark this review constructive!