Eternal Melody

Eternal Melody

A Poem by Fanciful Goddess

Inspired by sailormoon song


                           "Eternal Melody"

My love is reaching to endless sky,
through the galaxies.
My heart has grown fond of you.
It will never let go.
Never let go of the warmth.
My dreams have no limits.
My love I love you.
I love you so much that I could die,
drifting in the wind; dreaming of you.
I drift into your arms repeatedly.
Every time I find it harder to pull myself away.
The wind is cold and the night is starlit,
with a bitter loneliness.
We should be holding each other right now,
even with you being next to me. It still feels lonely
when you want to hold the one you love.
My heart is beating an eternal melody.





© 2011 Fanciful Goddess

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Fanciful Goddess

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its so beautiful nice job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is a very beautiful write with such a dreamlike feel. I love the last line "My heart is beating an eternal melody".. thats just wonderful.. You penned these emotions well :) xx

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Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on March 16, 2011
Last Updated on May 1, 2011
Tags: Eternal, melody, Eternity, love, endless, endless love, poem
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