MY VISIBLE LAD OF DREAM

MY VISIBLE LAD OF DREAM

A Poem by Cerise
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The definition of my soul-mate

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My dream lad has come again
He saves me from my nightmares
Come as an angel in disguise
You are my balm to the pain

The green blue hue of your eyes
The sparkling balls within
The lips so amazing and soft
Whispering sweet nothings
You are my rainbow come to spread beauty

The hair falling on forehead
Like a devilish pirate come to kidnap me 
From anguish and torment, loving me through my dreams
With an amazing glint and gleam

You are the sunlight of my dark lit life
Come on a horse with shiny white mane, golden red chestnut coat
Running through the wild forest coming with a thud
Come to save me from the horror of life
To calm me and cool me with feathery touch

You are purest water come to sparkle my life
I surrender to you, for I want no one
Your touch gives me life
I don’t know what I would do without you

Reality has come with a bang
Don’t worry my love, I will be back again
You shall be my death and my life
Tomorrow we shall be together without restriction and grief
I shall be yours again, however brief.



© 2014 Cerise


Author's Note

Cerise
tell me how u felt..:)..thankyou

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Romantically dreamy , softly steamy, sadly gleamy...:)...........

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cerise

6 Years Ago

thank u....
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)................
so romantic, i love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cerise

7 Years Ago

Aww...Thank you..:)
Lovely write with a touch of sadness.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cerise

7 Years Ago

Thankyou..:)
The very fact you have had 12 previous reviews for this work suggests that there is an interest in your writing fancyfati - Are you into rap by any chance? All Good Things, N

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cerise

7 Years Ago

ahhnn..no probz....its gud to gt different opinions for once...:)
Neville

7 Years Ago

You sound like a veteran. If so, why have you not reviewed any of my work?
Cerise

7 Years Ago

lolz noo..nothing like dat..i will surely review your work give me some time..:)..just stuck in some.. read more
I agree with the other reviewers. I think this is a very good poem. I liked it a lot. Also, I think you like men with blue-green eyes (hazel?) as I seem to recall reading it in other works here. :o)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cerise

7 Years Ago

Thankyou..:D..it meant a lot..:)..ehhe..yaa i truly love buish green eyes...not exactly hazel...hehe.. read more
well done ...amazing write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cerise

7 Years Ago

Thankyou..:)
My dream lad has come again
He saves me from my nightmares
Come as an angel in disguise
You are my balm to the pain
The most lovliest beggining of a poem! Loved it! It was sweet but sad. 100/100 Keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cerise

7 Years Ago

Thankyouuuuuuuuuuuu....:D...your reviews truly get a huge smile on my face..:)...
Katerina

7 Years Ago

I'm glad I made u smile. One small smile makes your day! And you're welcome! :D
Cerise

7 Years Ago

eheh..:)
Pretty! ^-^ The ending was kind of sad, but it was still really pretty and flowy. :) Excellent work. Keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cerise

7 Years Ago

Aww....thankyou soo much..:D...it meant a lot..:)
Well I felt slightly sad I guess for the horse as some cruel person died its mane! lol
No I was sad as it felt like a yearning for something the protagonist cannot get in life. At the same time they were looking forward to the dream so pehaps were resigned to only dreaming-again a sad position unless a choice that was made. The poem flowed well with good emotion. The line 'I don’t know what I had do without you.' does not appear to make sense so maybe review it?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cerise

7 Years Ago

Hehe..thank-you so much..:D..I will try to change it :)
A encounter with the dream relation that promises remedy but will, on its return, carry us to new heights of the relationship.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cerise

7 Years Ago

Thankyou..:D..it meant a lot

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Added on August 27, 2012
Last Updated on January 14, 2014
Tags: love, fantasy, dream

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Cerise
Cerise

dubai, dubai, United Arab Emirates



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