MY VISIBLE LAD OF DREAM

MY VISIBLE LAD OF DREAM

A Poem by Cerise
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The definition of my soul-mate

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My dream lad has come again
He saves me from my nightmares
Come as an angel in disguise
You are my balm to the pain

The green blue hue of your eyes
The sparkling balls within
The lips so amazing and soft
Whispering sweet nothings
You are my rainbow come to spread beauty

The hair falling on forehead
Like a devilish pirate come to kidnap me 
From anguish and torment, loving me through my dreams
With an amazing glint and gleam

You are the sunlight of my dark lit life
Come on a horse with shiny white mane, golden red chestnut coat
Running through the wild forest coming with a thud
Come to save me from the horror of life
To calm me and cool me with feathery touch

You are purest water come to sparkle my life
I surrender to you, for I want no one
Your touch gives me life
I don’t know what I would do without you

Reality has come with a bang
Don’t worry my love, I will be back again
You shall be my death and my life
Tomorrow we shall be together without restriction and grief
I shall be yours again, however brief.



© 2014 Cerise


Author's Note

Cerise
tell me how u felt..:)..thankyou

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good poem...but to this day i've always wondered about 'sweet nothings' if they're nothing perhaps i've been getting them all this time and just not noticing...hmm

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

ahh...thankyou..:D...welll sweet nothing means more of love talk but they dont carry any importance... read more
It's romantic. It feels romantic. It's just ROMANTIC!! So cute!
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

hehhehe...aww thankyou..:D
Anonymous Girl

11 Years Ago

Lol, you are welcome :)
Being a bloke I don't usually warm to White Night on Shining armour type stuff, but this was lovely and captured my attention immediately. Well done + thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Ah. Thank you :D for taking time to read.
Pól

11 Years Ago

np, FF
Cerise

11 Years Ago

:)
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Mia
Lovely flow. This is a very sweet poem. Are you in love? This poem drips of love and sweet tenderness and that is always wonderful to see! It warmed me up. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

hehe...i shall rembr your words...ths days thr seem to b far more broken hearts than true love..:).... read more
Mia

11 Years Ago

Fingers and toes crossed!!!
Cerise

11 Years Ago

lolz..:)..ditto
i felt that i have enjoyed reading it. i can understand it as something all girls dream of, the dreams knight on that white horse..very nicely written. great poem for a promising poet

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

aww...thankyou..:D...hehe am lucky enough to have your views on most of my works...its been pleasure.. read more

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Added on August 27, 2012
Last Updated on January 14, 2014
Tags: love, fantasy, dream

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Cerise
Cerise

dubai, dubai, United Arab Emirates



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