Life Never Plays A Fair Game

Life Never Plays A Fair Game

A Poem by Cerise
"

When nothing seems to be in your favor you got to sit tight and let everything go smooth.

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abhor my life..
It's so not fair...
Life's not great..
People are always late...
Nothing happens on time...
No one has ever given a dime...
Love is never fair...
Money is not always there...
Don't break the heart, I won't bear...
I did no wrong, don't blame just because I am born...
Everything sucks, there is no luck...
God is always there,  but we still dare...
Sit tight and let life go on....
Don't sit like a wimpy kid rather act like a don...
"Everything will be fine", believe in yourself and your line....
You will do it and you will do it right..
Because it's your freaking life and nobody is going to bite...
Move on and be strong...
No one will ever point at you...because you are never wrong....:D

© 2013 Cerise


Author's Note

Cerise
please review..thankyou..:)

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"Fairness does not mean every gets the same. Fairness means everyone gets what they need. And the only way to get what you need is to make it happen yourself." This is one of my favourite lines from The Kane Chronicles series by Rick Riordan.

Yes, life is not fair, but there's nothing we can do about it except walk our own paths. I love how you put it so boldly in the lines: You will do it and you will do it right/because it's your freaking life and nobody is going to bite...
The straightforwardness was very striking.

Keep up the good work! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Cerise

9 Years Ago

Thankyou soo mcuh for your wonderful review..:D



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"I did no wrong, don't blame just because I am born" You made me a bit emotional by jotting this piece.
This's a true and a very marvelous emotionally written piece. I hate when someone as beautiful as you feel "Bad and so sad"

I feel the pain the this poem but now i wanna ask first from an angel that hey! Are ya sure you never think of me something like that you penned into the piece that breaking the heart and spoiling the life of angels at all?????????????????????????????????? (coz, i need to know what an angel thinks of me coz, i hate hurting angels)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cerise

8 Years Ago

awww..thank you for such a touching review...hahahah.....dont wrry it was no were related to u/..:P... read more
Neon

8 Years Ago

My pleasure!

Ah! Thanks! Now am feeling good that i never hurt any angels hurt, thanks .. read more
Cerise

8 Years Ago

hahahahahahha.....r welcome genius
A very accurate and realistic snapshot of the so-called Human Condition...well-voiced, and the ending ties it all together nicely with a note of optimism :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

Aww..Thankyou so much..your kind words meant a lt..:)
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)
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Pax
life is never fair....it's a challenge throughout our lives.. but we knew that there is always a reason to it and we learned from it ..then go on in the next list of life's journey...
great write...you show great light in this writing..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

Thankyou so much..:D
"Fairness does not mean every gets the same. Fairness means everyone gets what they need. And the only way to get what you need is to make it happen yourself." This is one of my favourite lines from The Kane Chronicles series by Rick Riordan.

Yes, life is not fair, but there's nothing we can do about it except walk our own paths. I love how you put it so boldly in the lines: You will do it and you will do it right/because it's your freaking life and nobody is going to bite...
The straightforwardness was very striking.

Keep up the good work! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Cerise

9 Years Ago

Thankyou soo mcuh for your wonderful review..:D
for months i was homeless and living on the streets and got so tired of hearing from "friends" that everything would be ok, until recently i became that... ok
this is why i see your words in graphic detail, very nice write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

Thankyou..:)..your review meant alot..:D
quinfinn

9 Years Ago

you are welcome, and...i don't subscribe to those persons who think all poetry must look like their .. read more
Cerise

9 Years Ago

awww..you are wonderful..thankyou soo much for your lovley motivational words..you inspire me to wri.. read more
the shape is not look like a poem but thought behind it is good

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

Thankyou soo much..:)
Life is hardly ever fair . . . if it was, there wouldn't be any effort required to live through it

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

very true..:)
Hiya fancyfati,
I have just agreed to be your friend & have commenced reading through your writerscafe work. I particularly like this piece & yup you are quite right, life is seldom fair but we have to get on with it. All Good Things, your friend N

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

aww..Thankyou soo much ..it meant alot..:)
Neville

9 Years Ago

No problem fancyfati, enjoy
Cerise

9 Years Ago

:)
I enjoy reading your poems! Life is never fair, and all we can do it to fight for a life... There's no one to blame, but ourselves if we don't try our best. Love the message of the poem! Believing in ourself is really important:D:D
Nice written!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

I dedicate this to u..:P...Thankyou darling..:)...
Cynthia Man

9 Years Ago

Ur welcome :) totally enjoy reading your poems!
Cerise

9 Years Ago

:)
i enjoyed this very good :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

thankyou so much..:D
sierrasparks91

9 Years Ago

your welcome

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Added on August 28, 2012
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