Smoking a day kills a life away

Smoking a day kills a life away

A Poem by Cerise
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the prolonged pain from cigarettes and problems from its continuous usage

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The dead would rather wish to be alive

Here you are giving it all away in vain

Ended up plotting your own death

What I ask you, will you ever gain?


One puff is all you need, to kill a creature

And boom, it becomes a bad deed

Can't you think for once, how it will harm?

The young, the old, it’s like a bad luck charm


Addicted you are and you might forever be

Are those memories so unbearable to see?

You want to forget better find another way

Solution is in front, so you had better stay

 

Cigarette is not the problem to your matter

The only thing it will ever do is kill and shatter

Think of those suffering because you are insane

Who cannot breathe, Who are in profound pain?

 

Lungs collapsed, back cut open

It sounds horrible to even be spoken

Stand up and fight diseases on your way

For humanity’s sake stop with this play......

 

AN INNOCENT CIGARETTE A DAY WILL  RUIN YOUR LIFE IN A HUGE WAY...

© 2015 Cerise


Author's Note

Cerise
Emphysema-is a long-term, progressive disease of the lungs caused by smoking...Each one of you can contribute in a huge way by not smoking...Every time you smoke your life decreases and I believe life is very precious to waste.

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I wish this could be posted on every bar and in every public window possible. Very courageous of you to write this and thank you for standing up for those who are specifically allergic to cigarette smoke. It is absolutely heartless to smoke around a child, let alone other adults. It's bad enough that there is so much pollution in so many areas of the world that one can barely see the sky. It is a terrible addiction that yellows the teeth, the nails, discolors the skin, blackens the lungs, and destroys ones own breath. The worst part is, it reeks for miles and sticks to everything. I like the way you ask your questions, the boldness of it. Thank you so much for this poem, God bless you, and hope you may be free of smoke! Honestly I really feel for those who are addicted to cigarettes, who are unable to stop even though they wish they could. They are not bad people, they really do need help. It would be interesting to see a poem showing their perspective. Still thanks again for spreading the awareness!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thank you soooo much for such a wonderful review...I completely agree with you...I wish we styed in... read more



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Nice try! Writing about a matter of such profound harm is not only inspiring but appreciated enough :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written, no smokey haze hiding this message.
I think the featured review speaks for me too..

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow...wat a lovely way to raise awareness..very well written dear,well done indeed hope people will take it to heart

Posted 5 Years Ago


true absolulety, without doubt,I I quit jan 11 2000, cant get my wife to quit, it is like waiting for a funeral to happen

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Awwiii...thats a wonderful news...congrats...well i hope ur wife will b able to quit soon too....if .. read more
Wow... Can we just have this printed out and made into a sticker so I can go place them in prominent locations around smokers? Your work is amazing and it really outlines the dangers of smoking.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thank you soooo much for such a wonderful review...:)
YES ! tell my son this, who is a heavy smoker. Fine write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading....:)
I wish this could be posted on every bar and in every public window possible. Very courageous of you to write this and thank you for standing up for those who are specifically allergic to cigarette smoke. It is absolutely heartless to smoke around a child, let alone other adults. It's bad enough that there is so much pollution in so many areas of the world that one can barely see the sky. It is a terrible addiction that yellows the teeth, the nails, discolors the skin, blackens the lungs, and destroys ones own breath. The worst part is, it reeks for miles and sticks to everything. I like the way you ask your questions, the boldness of it. Thank you so much for this poem, God bless you, and hope you may be free of smoke! Honestly I really feel for those who are addicted to cigarettes, who are unable to stop even though they wish they could. They are not bad people, they really do need help. It would be interesting to see a poem showing their perspective. Still thanks again for spreading the awareness!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thank you soooo much for such a wonderful review...I completely agree with you...I wish we styed in... read more
Amazing work! I agree with what you say. Smoking is a slow poison and smokers expose the surrounding people to secondary smoking which even more dangerous. Great way of putting all the seriousness and reason in your words.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thank you for review...:)
An important point with which I agree wholeheartedly. Smoking certainly affected my husband's family although he just ended up being turned off by it. Although in my experience those addicted to smoking don't see the point and even become hostile, no doubt there are exceptions.

The poem is great as a whole, but I think it would benefit from Aaran's suggestions.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thank you soooo mch...:)
Very nice message Cerise you have tried to portray the best with simple words. Its indeed hard for chain smokers to give up smoking but your message my dear friend I hope and wish will help in changing many lives. God bless. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cerise

5 Years Ago

Thank you soooo mch...:)

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