You Live In Me....

a short term love

I see you  come with a pout 

Your scent seeking me out

I try to ignore but for how long

Till when will I hold the passion at bay

I am sorry that you dont have a say

You are the light on my deep dark way

You are the rain on a scorching sunny day

You are my soothing balm on the itchy wound

I am sorry that you had to be marooned

I know baby , we were so well in tune

I guess things go wrong even if we assume

I owe you a lot but I cannot stay

Each of us have to find our way

There is no second choice I do know

Like I read you, if only you could read me too..

Author's Note

let me know what you think

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

Genuine writing, great footage in reality, well penned

[Cerise]

Thank you dear..:)

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, take care friend

[Ruth]

The universe has a right time for everything in our lives, so it is said, insightful poem...touched my heart x

[Cerise]

Thank you dear lady...:)

[TPK Stories]

beautifully written fancyfati...

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I believe in second chances, but it depends on both parties.
This is sad but words are well chosen so well-done, my friend.

[Cerise]

Thank you dear....I agree with ya..:)

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i loved it a lot, it was great :)

[Cerise]

Thank you...

[Layla J Omorose]

This poem didnt really grab me. For me it felt like something was lacking. I just dont know what. I do like the last lines of the poem. Speaking about communication and being able to speak and listen to the other.

[Cerise]

Thank you for review..:)

[J. Land]

Your expressive language tinged with subtlety give this poem tremendous impact. Wonderful!

[Cerise]

Thank you so mcuh..:)

[Jennie Baron]

Such an awesome expression of a short-lived love affair, one you can't resist even though you know it won't last. The images are indeed nice, and the images also appeal to the senses, feeling, scent and sight.

[Cerise]

Thank you again dear..:)

[Black Star Adept]

Great poem, such nice visual aspects!

[Cerise]

thank you...:)