CHOICES WE FACE

The emotions of mine will kill me alive

The tempest has arisen and it is so high

The ghouls of my past have seeped in again

The thoughts are hurting, it’s all mundane

One by one, I have killed my own

I swim and bathe in blood of those I have sown

Time is passing like a wicked witch

It’s full of hatred torture and betrayal

However, in all of this I find an innocent pearl

Come to save me from my torment and dooms

It is now or never already, my death looms

The time has come to let go of crooked ways

It is time for goodness to flow through my veins….

Reviews

[S_Writergirl]

A beautiful poem. Amazing job!

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[paul sal.....]

We are,afterall, human. We tend to bump into things and we bruise easily but we are resilient and move onto and gravitate towards better things because their is ...............life..........a most special thing

[CoffeePoet]

yes it is so good!
love the rhyming in it

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[CoffeePoet]

your welcome (:

[Saddam]

The emotions of mine will kill me alive
The tempest has arisen and it is so high

Wonderful write dear friend.
Thanks for sharing this awesome piece.

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[TPK Stories]

I relate to this as I wonder when things will finally go right in my life...well written....

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)...well i am sure all you need is lil bit of patience who knoes life might surprise u tomorrow with a beautiful surprise...

[Ency Bearis]

Good thought and well written poem

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[Calibaster]

That's so true! Well done, I really enjoyed it. I liked the Wicked Witch part, and even though it was way worse than me myself, I feel like I could relate to it a bit. Great job!

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[Calibaster]

Your welcome! :)

[Shay]

i really like these lines. They speak within themselves. thanks for sharing

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[singingtree]

good job!!! Well written with sooooo much emotion.

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[Sadiesmiles]

Brilliant work. I love the word choice in this piece, I thouroghly enjoyed it! :)

[Cerise]

Thankyou for review..:)