A Weather of Sadness

A Weather of Sadness

A Poem by Cerise

I sit on a stool, Middle of nowhere

Surrounded by a view beguiling to me

Wind blows lightly giving me a chill

Welcoming the feel of winter again


The clouds likely to cry out soon

The jittery feeling settling within

The happiness is floating everywhere

Its time for freedom to reign again


Once I had been the one living outdoor

Today I am stuck in a place without air

The need to live and enjoy is engraved deep

All to soon reality comes crashing down ......

© 2022 Cerise


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the clouds likely to cry out soon. I really like that line in this one.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Well' I suggest you open the window and, breath. Air does not discriminate between hot and cold, people do..............

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cerise

8 Years Ago

Thank you for review..:)
great words lovely poem. I liked the way you weaved the words through. Great imagery.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cerise

8 Years Ago

Thank you for review..:)
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The need to live and enjoy is engraved deep

All to soon reality comes crashing down ......

well expressed

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

Thank you for review..:)
You are so good!
loved it 💕💕💕

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

Heheeh..thank you...:)
You write it quite well. Imaginary is clean.

The clouds likely to cry out soon
The jittery feeling settling within
The happiness is floating everywhere
Its time for freedom to reign again

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

Thank you..:)
...... when standing outside with the wind blowing, with the storm clouds gathering, leaves thrown and trees dancing......before the sky breaks and the rain drops.....with the sheer ferocity of nature reveling in itself.......do you ever have the feeling that what ever god exists is hugging you? That the air swimming through your sleeves and out your collar are the very arms of Everything? That while you fight to stand in one place, with the gusts forcing you sideways......you're really fighting to all be part of it again?

Anyway.....

Hard to have that feeling in an office building. Or an apartment. Or the mall. Rarely seems to come up in conversation either.

This was a long way of saying I like your words. Sorry that to forever.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

Ahhahaah..thank you for taking time to write such a beautiful review...
thats life.................... sometimes u r free , other confouded. beautiful piece ff

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

Thank you...
Weather can be unexpected...we can't reign in the weather...excellently written...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cerise

9 Years Ago

Thank you...:)

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Added on December 3, 2014
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Cerise
Cerise

dubai, dubai, United Arab Emirates



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