Love

NEW ACCOUNT!! Lost the password to my old one and I can't remember which email address i used or my email address and blah blah blah! Point is, old account is dead. I'll post the new stuff here (besides the cringe-inducing stuff) as well as the old stuff

A poison so pure

It kills a man fast

Yet so many seek it

without knowing its past

For it killed a man named Romeo

and his maiden Juliet

such a lethal drug

with a deadliness not yet met

I sought it once

this poison, unseen

It is given to me bow and I say:

merci pour le venin

Author's Note

not sure how to pronounce the last line. so if it rhymes GREAT! If not, Live with it.

Reviews

[Ella Emergency]

hmm.. is love really lethal? or are our feelings lethal?
"love is an ability, not a feeling"
(haha, from DAN IN REAL LIFE.. that was a lame movie with ONE good quote)
but otherwise
i like it
especially since you put in romeo and juliet WHILE making it rhyme
bee-yoh-tee-ful!