My love's loss

My love's loss

A Poem by Faati Jaan
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You were reminiscing,

forming memories into words of a nostalgic and paternal love,

and in mid-sentence stopped,

the red swelling in your eyes,

your stone countenance melting away with tears.

God…

You’re so human..

© 2016 Faati Jaan


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A parents heart can break ever so easily when discussing a love that once was and is now only a memory. It takes years to fight back the tears, arise from the daydreams and not see a object that swiftly reminds them of the love of their lives.

Yes, being human is a good way to describe it in few words.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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A parents heart can break ever so easily when discussing a love that once was and is now only a memory. It takes years to fight back the tears, arise from the daydreams and not see a object that swiftly reminds them of the love of their lives.

Yes, being human is a good way to describe it in few words.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 17, 2016
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Tags: grief, loss, love, parents, fathers, nostalgia, sadness, memories

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Faati Jaan
Faati Jaan

Kansas City, KS



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irani-amrikayi. persian hybrid lioness. developing muslim and therapist and human being. other unmentioned identities. i write what's in my heart; short poems about love, loss, hardships, relations.. more..

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