castle

castle

A Poem by Derrek Wesley Steven Gaspard
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What you see in the mirror is a world, in that world is knowing, knowing, and knowing. Somehow everytime it's a different thing.

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Your love is a castle

I stand in the ramparts

Your archers are cupids

Who shoot many arrows

I am not in love

Inside I am much younger

Separate from the me who staggers

under gravities pull

© 2009 Derrek Wesley Steven Gaspard


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This is great!

I love how you were able to corralate...and the whole analogy, that was great!

Overall, this is a beautiful piece.
I really like this alot.

XxStaySweet,
Rina

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Derrek Wesley Steven Gaspard
Derrek Wesley Steven Gaspard

Manchester, NH



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Derrek Gaspard, born 1981, relocated from New Orleans (where he was born and raised), Louisiana to Manchester, NH in September of 2007. Derrek hasn't written anything worth reading yet but he is wor.. more..

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