something like

I dared dive into his hazel

and found myself 

Swimming in his mind 

Drowning in my thoughts 

Exploring senses crashing

tasting the scent of red

Gasping-controllost  

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graspwithoutslipping

And then - 

fear dismissed

even hope replaced 

with something like 

whatever happens 

happens 

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Liked the things you did blend in one - poetry. You do float 'pon the buoyancy of his love, but get lost inside your own thoughts. Nice imagery.

[fatimasque]

Thank you Adams. it's nice to know i'm still read and enjoyed. you've quite encouraged me to come and share some more online... :D

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the internal thoughts and struggle.I like the ending, wanting to take chances. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[fatimasque]

just saw this... its been a while since i got online. thank you!!