A girl with a heart broken face

A girl with a heart broken face

A Poem by Fayiza


When I go out that room
I don't remember whether I flushed the toilet, then who?
I cry for 1 hour then I sleep because of pain
I look like a bogy then!
My face becomes yellow.
My lips bugle like a pillow.
My right eye looks like an almond
And the other one forms like a diamond
Around them I see dark circles
Nothing will save me even miracles
I look myself in the mirror
Then I cry a cello
I ask her who are you?
She answers I am you a big fool

© 2009 Fayiza

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This is curiously intriguing in the most great of ways...

Posted 11 Years Ago

I can see myself in this poem so naturally I like it...even if its not the pretty kind...we all have different facets to our lives...and I can be the biggest of fools...so join the club dear friend...

Posted 11 Years Ago

I think you are being to hard on yourself. We all make mistakes but hopefully we learn from them. Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 6, 2009
Last Updated on February 15, 2009



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