Father's touch

I've turned myself to touch The Self,
Madly wanting to make It mine...
Oh, that silly was the me!

But deep within I've found a Child,
Fatherless and Motherless it was The Child.
I've searched The Eye to comfort Him,
But I've fall in love on to His Heart.

The Father touched the heart of Child.
And then there's NoThing.

Reviews

[lessa (kenzie)]

But deep within I've found a Child,
Fatherless and Motherless it was The Child.
I've searched The Eye to comfort Him,
But I've fall in love on to His Heart.

love this part, intriguing write here, nicely written

[Soren]

Nicely written. Thought provoking and with a good message. The wording was nicely done and the meter flowed.

[Florin Dragoș Minculescu]

Thank you very much for the review provided,
especially since I'm not a native English speaker, so feedback encourages me in my endeavors.

[Soren]

Courageous to write in a non native language