A lonely Shadow.

A lonely Shadow.

A Poem by Fear Corrupts!

        A lonely Shadow           

 

 

A lonely shadow, in a sea of light.

Alone in the world, with no one alike.

 

How different,

How outstanding,

How unique the shadow is. 

But to be alone, is not a bliss. 

 

The shadow lacks friendship, bonds, & more.

Without a social life, the shadow's life is a bore.

***

 

Perhaps one day,

the bitter tree casting the shadow will fall.

Or,

Maybe the shadow, will just have to take control.

 

The right time will come,

for dark to meet the light.

The shadow will burn the tree,

& be set free for flight.

 

 " To stand out in the sea is important,

 

          but to be alone is not a bliss "

 

 

 

© 2009 Fear Corrupts!


Author's Note

Fear Corrupts!
There is a point in this poem, but not just one single meaning.

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pretty good :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


you need to run this through spell check on a program such as ms Word and repost it, just my advice

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maybe the tree is the quieter, lonlier side of ourselves. At least that is what it seems like to me. Anyway, as for the poem you have good ryhme, flow and you once again are making a point. Trying to us to look inside ourselves perhaps? A good write and interesting question! ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


The tree respresents...

hurt?
lonliness?
...yourself?

It's hard to say. I will probably mean something different to each & every person who reads it.
I like this poem. It's true.

Posted 13 Years Ago


love it darling!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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