A) Big B) Small C) None of the above

A) Big B) Small C) None of the above

A Poem by Fear Corrupts!

     A) Big  B) Small C) none of the above.

 

There is more to me,

than what you can see.

 

Appearance shows not,

what lies in me.

 

I'm not what you think,

i'm not what you thought.

 

I'm nothing small,

big, or what not.

 

I'm a world of my own,

a planet one of a kind.

 

I'm out of this universe,

not easy to find.

 

My outside reflects,

nothing from my mind.

 

People look at me,

look at me blind.

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Fear Corrupts!


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Wow. Surprisingly, I like this poem. Not really my usual type of poetry but the flow and rhythm of this poem is really good and I like the individuality expressed in this one. I especially like the title. It's a cool creative and unique twist on something that is so commonplace and ordinary, a multiple choice question that everyone takes but that is intensely personal and different. Just to point out as well, in the third stanza, the second "i'm" needs to be capitalized. Also, I particularly liked the ending... "look at me blind"... deep yet simple. Nicely put.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Fear Corrupts!
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