Spoiled Charm.

Spoiled Charm.

A Poem by Fear Corrupts!

   Spoiled Charm.

 

Cherry Blossom, oh cherry blossom,

the  wind  has spoiled you rotten.

Your perpetrator has stolen your sweet purity,

your principles have been lost & forgotten.

 

Your once alluring fruity scent,

now attracts nothing but wasps.

Your once beautiful appearance,

is now covered, clouded & lost.

 

You've fallen off of your tree,

you've hit the ground,

you've hit the bottom.

Your colourful existence is history.

 

Cherry Blossom, oh cherry blossom,

it really is a shame.

The wonderful thing that you once were,

can now never be restored again.

© 2008 Fear Corrupts!


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good!!!
THOUGH... i must admit... when you said:
cherrry blossom, oh cherry blossom...
I started thinkin of Timothy goes to school immediately!!!
because the one chinese girl or watever had a cherry blossom tree...
thanks...!! HAHA...now i shalll go watch the show...:P
very wellll written!!
LOVED IT

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a great poem, i mean the undertext is kind of sad, loosing ones virginity and feeling you shouldnt have, regreting it later... being a guy its not really an issue but it means alot more to a girl...i know, my girl, love of my life, had us wait for eight months before... it was worth it though... thats a keeper and a good on at that... Thank you for the reviews earlier, by the way, i forgot to write that in the first review... Later...

Posted 12 Years Ago


hey molly i like this poem i try to write poety like this sometimes. yu are so good like writin poetry. thanks for sharing

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Fear Corrupts!

Wastedville, Canada



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