Fantasy World.

Fantasy World.

A Poem by Fear Corrupts!

Just a light read, you'll see.



" Where the princesses dance,
                     & where the fairies twirl.
                              Where anything happens;
                            Fantasy World "

    The peaceful dark this evening,
Is free of any fright.
For the brave bright stars kiss,
The wide open sky tonight.

The warm wind sweeps,
Over the smooth grass land.
The graceful waves curl,
Over the white fine sand.

The gray wolves cry,
Out in song to eachother.
The melodies flow,
Across the island & linger.

The meadow fresh; delightful,
Belonging only to the mind of one man.
The world here is beautiful.
In Imagination Land.

© 2009 Fear Corrupts!

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Majestic, this is so enchanting and magical. You brought a whole world to life with beautiful visual discriptions :-). I would love to live in this world, everything in this poem was magical, i loved it :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Nice attempt Rhyme scheme is a little off and unmetered but I enjoyed

Posted 11 Years Ago

simply brilliant i love the description throughout this piece very calming as if you can reach out and touch the grass or the sand... wonderful!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Short & sweet, yet enough to capture my attention though.
I likey.


Posted 12 Years Ago

beautiful piece of poetic prosean enjotable read

Posted 12 Years Ago

Very beautifully written. I loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on February 23, 2009
Last Updated on March 1, 2009


Fear Corrupts!
Fear Corrupts!

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