[Looking Out The Window into The Drab]

[Looking Out The Window into The Drab]

A Poem by felioness
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Thinking back when ...

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Looking out the window into the drab

with the dying light of day graying sight


I will sometimes wage war against
the black hounds that rule my soul
in those twilight moments
before night spreads her a*s
darkening the landscape
promising nocturnal pleasures
for the willing, lucky and the damned


Teetering on the cusp of self awareness
I am an old man
Raging against the clock
Raging against time
Raging against this forgotten, 
shriveled c**k 

and all the women  

who will never be mine


I was one skookum sonofabitch back then
My heart encased in leather and vain regrets

© 2018 felioness


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Steamy rage is something one must face in the darkness of ones life, Looking out the window raging against the clock of time. I really like your poem thank you for sharing . I hope you look at my writings and tell me what you think.

Posted 5 Years Ago


felioness

5 Years Ago

Many thanks! I will read some of yours!
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Woe be unto the clock! Right!? And yes our nature, sometimes feels like hounds driving it, just pure instinct no reason at all whatsoever. Nocturnal pleasures!

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is poetry. Raw, hard and direct. I liked the story line in the poem and the characters. You create visions of dangerous places and dangerous situations. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


felioness

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the read and encouraging comment!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
There is nothing sadder than a bitter old rake. Really good imagery in this one. Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


felioness

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much! I appreciate the comment and the read very much!

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Added on January 18, 2018
Last Updated on January 21, 2018
Tags: aging, regrets, thoughts

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felioness
felioness

Saskatchewan, Canada



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