im sorry i killed you baby

im sorry i killed you baby

A Poem by hopelove

its how i killed my dead ex girlfriend tea

im sorry i killed you sweet heart
as we fight in the car
you cry as you drive the car
it raining you lose control
as the car hits a tree 
i see you die slow and painful
i survive it you dont
im sorry sweet tea

© 2011 hopelove

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i hope you like it

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Very sad poem..
I love it, but watch your grammar. Bad grammar ruins the flow of the poem. Also, try to add some punctuation.
Other than that, keep writing, you have talent.

Posted 10 Years Ago

ohhh myyy. this is so saddd. i would cry. i would be like "WHYYY!? TAKE ME INSTEAD!" or something along those lines. OR i would be screaming "why do the good die young!?". or call the cops... popo.... 5-0. whatever you wanna call e'm. ambulance. really good write for such few words in it.

Posted 11 Years Ago

So sad...

Posted 11 Years Ago

So sad! :(

Posted 11 Years Ago

but same time it leaves a tear after it

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is so sad.

Posted 11 Years Ago

aweeee this is sad

Posted 11 Years Ago

That's... just so sad. I do like it though, but it's kind of haunting in a way.

Posted 11 Years Ago

that is so sad. but really good i like it

Posted 11 Years Ago

There is an overwhelming sadness here.. regret mingled in the rain.. longing to go back.. to undue it all..

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on April 13, 2011
Last Updated on April 13, 2011



warren, PA

hi im hope im 12 and im 5 foot 7 inches of joy im a fun loveing girl with a bad side and im bi so dont get on my bad side more..

your love your love

A Poem by hopelove

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