im sorry i killed you baby

im sorry i killed you baby

A Poem by hopelove
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its how i killed my dead ex girlfriend tea

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im sorry i killed you sweet heart
as we fight in the car
you cry as you drive the car
it raining you lose control
as the car hits a tree 
i see you die slow and painful
i survive it you dont
im sorry sweet tea

© 2011 hopelove


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hopelove
i hope you like it

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Very sad poem..
I love it, but watch your grammar. Bad grammar ruins the flow of the poem. Also, try to add some punctuation.
Other than that, keep writing, you have talent.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ohhh myyy. this is so saddd. i would cry. i would be like "WHYYY!? TAKE ME INSTEAD!" or something along those lines. OR i would be screaming "why do the good die young!?". or call the cops... popo.... 5-0. whatever you wanna call e'm. ambulance. really good write for such few words in it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


So sad...

Posted 8 Years Ago


So sad! :(

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice
but same time it leaves a tear after it

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so sad.

Posted 8 Years Ago


aweeee this is sad

Posted 8 Years Ago


That's... just so sad. I do like it though, but it's kind of haunting in a way.

Posted 8 Years Ago


that is so sad. but really good i like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


There is an overwhelming sadness here.. regret mingled in the rain.. longing to go back.. to undue it all..

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on April 13, 2011
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hopelove
hopelove

warren, PA



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hi im hope im 12 and im 5 foot 7 inches of joy im a fun loveing girl with a bad side and im bi so dont get on my bad side more..

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A Poem by hopelove



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