The reality of Fantasy

The reality of Fantasy

A Story by Ediblewhisper
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Flash fiction. A story that was supposed to be written 60 words or less. The focus is to eliminate the unnecessary to illustrate a story. About hopes and dreams.

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Sketching furiously, she captured the essence of a ballerina. Fluttering fabric, pointed petal shaped feet, motion whipping on the paper. Pale arms in perfect posture, face alight, body curved in a dreamlike sway.

 “I’ve always wanted to do ballet.”

He smiled wittedly, “It seems you already can.”

She closed her eyes, toes pointed, energy flowing, hopping, a beautiful dancing flower.

© 2008 Ediblewhisper


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A very good desriptive work and an excellent piece of flash fiction, although primarily a poet myself, I though this was a great example of this genre.

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Added on October 25, 2008

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Ediblewhisper
Ediblewhisper

Decatur, GA



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I'm an artist. I lost alot of things in that devastating loss of information a couple of years back. more..

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