Cold blooded

Cold blooded

A Poem by Fey Frost

I'm cold, Frost flows within my veins

My heart is ice, it stabbed me once more

That cold gripped me with its chains

With elegance and pride my glacier I wore

 

My eyes a bottomless black hole

Stare into them you will lose your sanity

Indeed they are windows into my soul

A soul that's been ridden of humanity 

 

And though the ice pierces me

It has kept me from falling apart

What If it melts and I no longer be?

What if then I lose my only heart

 

I cannot imagine a day without frost

But what will happen when the sun dawns?

I Imagine myself feeling completely lost

When I am no longer frost's pawn

 

But maybe it will set me free

Maybe I would be able to fly

I would never look back and flea

But what if it’s all a lie?

 

Ice is all I have known

What if I can't handle the fire?

It scares me but I am at home

What if I die of my desire?

 

I prefer ice

For fire burns

 

Though I know

 

For Destruction

Ice would suffice

© 2015 Fey Frost


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This poem is amazing! My favorite part is definitely the second stanza. The imagery and rhyme scheme are very cool, and the ideas, especially the one about the ice piercing you but at the same time holding you together, are intriguing. Great work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


I really love this poem. It shows how they want to break free but can't because of fear. It shows what they are and it really is a beautiful poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Fey Frost

5 Years Ago

thank you so much, I really appreciate your review
I cannot find the perfect words to say this. I find this poem extremely beautiful and clever ! The way you are painting with letters this image in my head.
Thank you for posting.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Fey Frost

6 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read this and thanks for your kind words.
Wow I love this so much. It sounds so beautiful and epic. I love that you write about frost and your name is frost. So clever! I always love popular terms 'windows into my soul' they just express the truth simply. Well doen x

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fey Frost

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, this review means alot to me.

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