Wildecat's Toast

Wildecat's Toast

A Poem by Flame DM
"

Does no justice, I know and I can't write poems but here it goes.

"

 

 

I cannot write a poem,

That's a fact I do not hide.

I'm more into fiction things,

But I'll take you for this ride.

 

Poems are my weakness.

So why do I write, you ask.

I do it for a friend you see,

Who wears a wildecat mask.

 

This writer is a friend of mine.

one of my very first I must boast.

So grab a glass with gingerale,

This is Wildecat's special toast!

 

Wildecat is friends to many,

We are lucky there is no doubt.

He's a man gifted with words,

Full of meaning and a lot of clout.

 

Words spring out of his fingertips,

As he moves people every day.

He can make you laugh, make you cry.

He does it all in his very special way.

 

This man is from up above you know,

I may be a kid but there's truth in what I say.

God sent him down with a golden pen,

Though he denies this in his neaner neaner way.

 

He was a U.S Soldier,

Keeping enemies at bay.

Now he's a poem master,

A funny guru I must say.

 

I cannot write a poem,

But I'll continue with this post.

Masked avenger, this is for you,

Wildecat, your very special toast!

© 2008 Flame DM


Author's Note

Flame DM
To you wildcat, i know it does you no justice but I hope you like it!

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You actually think that you're not a writer? Come on now, you just wrote this piece and you've proven, not just to us, but to yourself that you can write the poetry...

So, it's a really great write... By the way, loved that picture... I'm pretty sure that Wildecat is loving every seconds of this piece... lol


Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Hello!
This is the first write of yours that I have read, as I am just posting poems on the forum, but as a poetess, you have done a note worthy job of rhyming, and your message flows through the write.
You should attempt to write more poetry, as this is an admirable tribute to your friend,


Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I think this is a very fun piece and well written, I raise a glass and say a toast to you for this poem and to wildecat well because he inspired you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You're not a poet? I'm amazed. That was breathtaking! You're really talented, hopefully you'll come to see your poetry like all of us do: amazing. Anyway, I really hope you do see you're so talented because I need to read more of your poems!

By the way, Wildecat's on of my friends on here, and I toast to him with you. He deserved this piece and like he says in his review way down at the bottom of all our's it was fantastic! I'm sure he loved it to pieces. Anyway, great job again! Thanks for posting: and again I really hope you do write more poems!

Now I'm going to go read some of your other pieces of work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sure sounds like a poem to me. I really enjoyed it and I'm sure Wildcat loved it.
Great little poem and toast to your friend.

Author: Nancy Lee Shrader

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ROFL this guy sounds great!
This isn't half bad it's actually very very good.
Your poems are not weak ^^.

MMFCL,
Malizzious.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Flame, this was just nice, really it was. The way you ended it was perfect. And you honored his service, I'm sure he apprieaciates it more than you know.
Ed

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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I like this poem. It was well written. I think it does him justice to some degree. He is a great guy so it is hard to put words into a poem about him. I think you did a great job though. I think you have more of a poet in you than you know.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You actually think that you're not a writer? Come on now, you just wrote this piece and you've proven, not just to us, but to yourself that you can write the poetry...

So, it's a really great write... By the way, loved that picture... I'm pretty sure that Wildecat is loving every seconds of this piece... lol


Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You are too a writer !! I just love this poem, speaks of truth regarding our ANGEL of a friend. Well done, I'm sure he will treasure it FOREVER. Thanks for sharing it. P.W.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Ah! This is so sweet for him, yes he is a very sweet person and an angel, well written and A very nice dedication.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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