Daring to Dream

Is there such a thing in this place... dreaming

The Mysterious whimsy of the damned lurking in the shadows brightly
as the sun rises nightly
hell is for certain, a cold weary place

upon the wasted dunes of red earth and ash

One dares to dream

 

Dancing and singing, women moving so spritely

The vision shimmers so defiantly

A fading memory full of thorns and a bloodied sash

A lone figure lies waiting in the stream

 

Memories of roses and their scent come so invitingly

That one dares to leave reality so temptingly

A place of pain full of whiplash

A silent figure, trapped within sorrow's cold beam

 

This is hell, where beauty is far too unsightly

To destroy and burn it would be rightly

Fallen and corrupted, nothing but a tattered face

A place where no morals clash

For not one figure lived enough to withstand Hell's dark gleam

 

Hell is cold and weary, not a spirit dared to shine brightly

Cries and groans are their melodies nightly

Far too dark and corrupted is this place

Where one is blinded by the dune's red earth and ash

Where one has nothing but nightmares to dream

Author's Note

Comments would be lovely.

Reviews

[Soul Fire]

Hey my phone wont let me message u so I am going to reply to your message this way my surgery is tomorrow and I would liketo thank you for your prayers and good thoughts I apologize for anu spelling.mistakes spell.xheck is mean

[fiery-san]

That's ok, I'm not that much of a grammar nazi... You're a strong person. A lot of people will be waiting and ready to help you after it. ^_^

[Soul Fire]

Fthank you so much

[Soul Fire]

Todays the big day

[fiery-san]

Once again god bless and good luck my friend. ^_^

[Soul Fire]

Thank you :)

[Pax]

intriguingly dark...
well crafted...
emotions is well evident...
imagery is well place...
fascinating as its a dreamy one...
great one kabayan!

[fiery-san]

thank you kababayan! Glad you like it. ^_^

[jamal]

i agree with T.W Knight its dark and deep. I like it :)

Good Job! keep going!

[fiery-san]

thank you jamal, your reviews are always welcome and truly appreciated. ^_^

[T.W. Knight]

Dark and deep. I like the lost hope that it implies. It shows that it is never lost.

[fiery-san]

Thank you, Mr. Knight. ^_^