Contradictingly Beautiful

Contradictingly Beautiful

A Poem by fiery-san
"

Your emotions are toiling... a beautiful mixture of love and hate

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I hate you.

You stupid incomprehensible bully

Full of joke and jeer

I despise you.

 

You stare and him balefully.

 

A contradiction escapes

No, you don’t.

His lips dare curl into a smirk

 

Brows furrow.

Tempers flare.

Yes, I do!

 

Yet still you hold his hand

You clench in realization

He tightens his grip and smiles.

 

You waver

Conflict clash within

You decide

 

I love you.

He grins even brighter.

You convey a silent reply of I love you too in turn.

© 2012 fiery-san


Author's Note

fiery-san
Comments would be lovely. ^_^

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Direst and honest emotion in the poem. I like the place and the situation in the poem. Love is a wild place to be. Don't know if we should stay or run? Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


So well put, love is stronger than hate and can withstand a woman's rage (sometimes) :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Like black and white huh :P

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. ^_^
Very nicely written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

9 Years Ago

Thank you. ^_^
this is a sweet poem, you lay it out great! love to hate/hate to love ^_^


Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

9 Years Ago

thank you jamal, your words are always very much appreciated. ^_^
This is something I am very fimilar with myself! Nice job! I am always finding myself relating to your work and this just makes me smile with memories of times I have been in these situations myself.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your review ni ni, I'm glad this poem has managed make you smile. ^_^
ni ni

9 Years Ago

Welcome!
Adorable. We all feel anger for the people we love, but I never think we could hate them. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, Amanda. It means a lot. ^_^
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Andie

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome! :)
This made me smile wide, who hasn't been there? That banter and playfulness, the wanting to strangle someone and make love to them at the same time! You've captured it beautifully in your word play. Kudos, nice write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

9 Years Ago

Thank you. This means a lot. ^_^
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Pax
very nice kabayan!
it's cute and lovely fight...
Natutuwa ako minsan pag na iinis yung X ko...I find it cute when she is angry...:D


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

9 Years Ago

Thank you kababayan ^_^

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Added on December 16, 2012
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Tags: romance, love, hate, contradiction

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The City of love, Within Panay, Philippines



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