A Taste of ...

A Taste of ...

A Poem by fiery-san
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Some things are not as good as they say they are

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Anticipation builds
The charm of every first time experience
You take a taste
The flavor dances upon your tongue
A mismatched medley of white and brown
And you realize
Nothing but bitter disappointment remains 

© 2012 fiery-san


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Author's Note

fiery-san
I made this because of my utter disappointment in a certain coffee place... I expected more from you...

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Urgh YES! I know how that feels. I'm glad someone in the world wrote an accurate poem about sucky coffee places. I hate sucky coffee places :P
This is short and well written :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

7 Years Ago

Thank you. ^_^
Frankly speaking, the poem was ok. I liked the description of coffee as a medly of brown and white but it lacks a certain feel. Words are perfectly placed. It just lacked that feel.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughts, they're are much appreciated. ^_^
Nicely written read here for everything that smells and looks good isn't always sweet as it or your mind thinks its going to be. we do learn from all experiences especially the bad ones. As always keep writing fellow writer

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

7 Years Ago

thank you kelvin. I'm glad you like it. ^_^
kelvin

7 Years Ago

You're welcome
Nicely thought out and has various ways you can enterprite it. I quite enjoyed this piece =)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

7 Years Ago

Thank you. And yeah, I just realized after writing it how a person could interpret it in different w.. read more
lol,,,coffee!!! well, starbucks is over priced, imo...but i like that this poem can relate to other new experiences too....good one..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

7 Years Ago

Yeah, I agree with that one, and thanks for the review. ^_^
ha, just wanted you to know I had a bad cuppa of this morning, and thought of you! ;-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

7 Years Ago

Hahaha... I see. I'm glad to have made an impression XD
haha this poem is the kind of poems i enjoy the most! didnt see that it was about the coffee place LOL :)))

Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

7 Years Ago

Thank you jamal! ^_^
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Pax
LoL... well better luck next time... now i know...lol.. what type of coffee is that kabayan?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

7 Years Ago

Starbucks... I'm thinking of giving it another chance, maybe I ordered the wrong type of coffee for .. read more
Pax

7 Years Ago

oh ... expensive one i guess... then lets say choose wisely.. hehe...
your most welcome kabaya.. read more
Haha. I love how this was written about coffee! It could have so many different meanings. Stick to Starbucks. lol.
Good job. ^-^

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

7 Years Ago

I know. Thank you for the review...I'm glad you like it. Starbucks... hmm... this was kinda about it.. read more
This reminds me of the first time I had a rootbeer float... Nice job! I love being able to relate!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fiery-san

7 Years Ago

Hmm... never had a rootbeer float... but did have rootbeer before... it was okay but not just my typ.. read more
ni ni

7 Years Ago

No problem, and yeah I do not like them myself.

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