Sleeper

Sleeper

A Poem by Dark Heart of Winter

Whispered secrets
Wrapped round my heart like tight bound silk
Snug and lovey under blankets
That swaddle your naked form
Tender eyes that melt my soul
Long silk hair caught and tangled
Clean and sweet, semen-soaked innocence
Warm slow heartbeats, purring
Your mind raw, incoherent, vulnerable
Cradled in my naked trust
Soft sighs as you drift into another world
Leaving me to marvel at
your still, warm form.

© 2014 Dark Heart of Winter


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Touching and pure, tender and heartfelt. Once again you capture a slice of time with all the emotion wrapped up in a words crafted so others might visit this place.

Keep it up.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark Heart of Winter

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!!!! That is EXACTLY what i try to do. :)
Such a powerful subject! Your writing is so magnificently constructed. 

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark Heart of Winter

9 Years Ago

Thank you! im quite happy with how well the rather unorthodox structure worked out
Wonderfully done. You brought these words to life. The structure is lovely as well

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark Heart of Winter

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)

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Added on April 8, 2014
Last Updated on April 8, 2014
Tags: sleeper, cuddling, lovers, night, bedtime, love, snuggle, warm and soft, dreams, short, sleeping, sleep




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