When it boils down

For me ex he knows who he is(:

When it boils down 

He won't be there,
He won't care, 
It won't be fair,
So just walk away.

He will act like a kid,
He will cut you off mid-,
He will point out all the wrongs you did,
So I just walked away. 

Then he will f**k off,
At first your heart will feel soft,
Then it will float aloft,
All because you walked away. 

You will be happy,
He will feel crappy,
It will be like a story but sappy,
Because I walked away. 

Author's Note

For you Jeff have a good life with Avigayil and serena
Hope my baby is okay I love her regardless because she won't hurt me like you did.

Xoxo
~a

Reviews

[Freedom's Child]

Awesome emotion and a good flow. "He will cut you off mid-" is great and draws the reader so that they are right there. I love that you were able to vividly show the anger and have the underlying be the sorrow. I am sorry for what you had to go through for this piece to be born but great piece!

[Jane Doe]

thanks so much for your review and condolences as well
(:

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a really sad poem. I enjoyed it because this is how I feel at moments. I hope you are feeling much better. Thank you for sharing.

[Jane Doe]

I wish I could say I was :(

[Angie Diane♥♥]

same..

[misha]

This was amazing and so full of emotion. Great job!

[Jane Doe]

Thanks so much (: