Broken Heart Remedy

this curses sorta

Bleeding out,

Smiling and crying,

No time to pout,

As I am dying.

 

No worries babe,

This isn't a comedy,

Maybe this will help you,

This is my broken heart remedy.

 

Just ignore the world,

No worries no fears,

Throw you head back and laugh baby,

Down a couple beers.

 

They will stitch you up,

They will love you,

But ignore it hun,

It for the best if you do.

 

Scream out your sorrow,

Drown in depression,

Hop around in happiness,

Struggle with supression.

 

This aint romance or action,

Sure as hell aint a comedy,

Babe this is my version,

Of a heart break remedy.

 

Author's Note

like it? Please rate and review all are cherrished(:

xoxo
-a

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

This ain't romance or action... Well penned.

[Jane Doe]

Thank you much for the review(:

[Sami Khalil]

You are quite welcome...

[Rtrt]

I like your realism. You show a lot of pain in your writing.

[Jane Doe]

Thanks (: I think I can't say everyone doesn't know pain but my past has caused me to know pain well

[Rtrt]

Welcome to the club.

[Babe Roxx]

Your voice, Abbigale, has gotten stronger in your poetry, and I am amazed with your talent, at your age...the Force is strong with you, oh sorry, Star Wars aired the other night...um, anyhoo, lovely emotions in your sorrowful words.

Write on. :)

[Jane Doe]

Lol thanks for your review :) i sorta like this i may sing it :D
xoxo
-a

[Babe Roxx]

You are so welcome, Abbigale...you should sing it. :)

~Ev

[Jane Doe]

i might my friend jacob wants me too

[Babe Roxx]

Jacob sounds like a really good friend...you should go for the gold, Abbigale. :)

[Jane Doe]

Is the gold jacob or singing it because honestly i could see jacob being gold i told him my entire past and he hasnt cared and still loves me :D

[Babe Roxx]

I meant singing, but I'm sure he's golden. :)

[Jane Doe]

:) thanks for both

[Babe Roxx]

You're welcome, brat. :)