A little cut

It's about death

A little cut,
And another one there,
No one will notice,
I doubt anyone will care.

Now I'm drifting,
Fast asleep,
Ive cut to much,
Guess I cut to deep.

Nothing you say can help,
I wish it could, I wish you could,
Honestly I wish anything,
I wish you would. 

Save me from my depression,
Baby I'm slowly drifting away now,
I'm giving up and I'm sorry,
There's no way you can help no way no how.

I can't really see anything, 
Only black and red,
And now everything's in pain,
Undying hell in my head. 

I'm done now and it's chill,
My bloods running out now, 
I'm pretty sure this is death, 
It's over so go ahead and bow.

The play is over,
I'm dead and gone,
There goes everything,
There goes our bond. 

Author's Note

Haven't written in a while I'm sorri y'all (: but I wrote this for you

Reviews

[Olivia Ashley]

this is really good !

[Jane Doe]

THANKS LIVIE HIT ME UP IM BORED AND HYPER IM FIVE FOOT NOW WOOOHOOO IM REALLY HYPER LOL ^.^

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Just shows how complex everyone is, regardless of age or anything....

Totally awesome write, very emotive...

[Jane Doe]

Thanks(:
Emotive is emotional right?

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Yes, but sounds better don't u think :p

[Jane Doe]

Yeah lol

[Invisable_Girl]

awesome write:) i really enjoyed reading it

[Jane Doe]

Thanks

[Invisable_Girl]

welcome:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok its a dark piece which does not fit with your smile so creative me hopes. It does need some crafting but in essence it is good and conveys meaning and feeling. I relate to it as I work in memntal health and come across such feelings in people all the time. So sad!

[Jane Doe]

Thanks for the review!(: and well tons of people smile doesn't mean their happy necessarily they could just be highly optimistic

~a