Back At It Again

Back At It Again

A Poem by Jane Doe

You push, I pull,
You throw me away,
Yet I come begging back,
"But not this time" I say. 

You don't want me anymore,
But I need you,
And it more than sucks,
Because I DON'T want to. 

No, no I do,
But you're not good for me,
Im coffee and your cream,
I'm the lock and you're the key.

But are you? 
Are you right for me?
Can you make it alright?
Will you let me see?

Can I watch while you dance,
The dance of love,
While you open your wings and take off,
Gracefully, like a dove?

I'll ignore her,
For she makes me sad,
But I'm crazy,possessive,and selfish,
Yet this mames me terribly mad.

I just want to be happy,
Is that I do not deserve it?
I'll just ponder this quietly,
While on our memories in the clouds, I sit.

© 2013 Jane Doe


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You've described repetitive circles in life well....certain metaphors, like the coffee/ cream & lock/key sounded a bit rehashed....and I'm sure you meant "makes" instead of mames? :)

Great poetry.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey Brat, um, I mean Pinay Princess...such emotions in your poem...you've grown stronger as a Poetess...I just hope you grow up too fast...enjoy your teenage years...I hope summer has been fun. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely written, made me read with a flow.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i underwent the same emotions quite recently.....and i got no words to describe them..infact i neva understood them myself...but here is a work of urz so beautifully put...that just read what i felt...lovely work dea!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very dramatic poem. I enjoyed it. The emotion was caught as it told the story.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 25, 2013
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